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Peer Review Worksheet

1. Introduction: How does the first paragraph introduce both the paper’s topic and the writer’s approach or general conclusion? Is the first sentence attention-getting and relevant to the topic?

           in the first paragraph both the papers topic and writes had a clear general conclusion. also in the first sentence it had a very well attention-getting it was well written with close to none mistakes.

2. What can you identify as a thesis statement? (Re-write it below) Suggest, if possible, a way to improve the introduction or thesis statement.

you had a clear thesis statement you dont have to work on it much. if anything all you have to do is add a bit more to the thesis and you'll have a perfect thesis statement. i would add how your meal came to be in the first place.

3. Structure: Can you identify the organization of the paper from the main idea of each paragraph? What are the main concepts explored in the paper? Does each paragraph make a relevant point that is distinct from what has already been covered? What are the main conclusions?

i could identify the organization of the paper from the main idea of each paragraph. each paragraph does make a relavant point that is distinct from what has already been covered. the main conclusion is that you wrote a pretty good essay which is easy to read and understand.

4. Clarity/Style: Did you find distracting grammar, punctuation, spelling, or word usage problems? Identify any patterns or themes you detect. Is the tone of the essay formal? If you find awkward sentences, try to explain why they don’t make sense to you.

i didn't find any distracting grammar, punctuation and spelling. the tone of the essay is formal all your sentences were very clear you didn't have any awkward sentences.

5. Resources: Does the author clearly identify his/her sources? Is proper in-text and reference format used?

the author clearly identified his sources and he used proper in-text and reference format.

6. What is/are the paper’s greatest strength(s)? Explain.

this papers greatest strengths are clear idea, great grammar, clear thesis and a very easy to read essay.