1. Soft drinks
2. donuts 
3. fast food 
4. candy 
5. toys 
6. milk 
7. hospital food 
8. can food 
9. fruit 
10. pet food

Caryn Sweeney

i agree with Caryn Sweeney, because she thinks that people on food stamps should eat and spend their money on healthier foods. She also was also on a college budget therefore she had to get the most she could with the little bet of money that she had in her pocket. Sweeney admitted that "It’s hard work being poor" but she didn't let that stop her from buying what she needed with her food stamps. People that have food stamps have to be happy with this new coming law because its only going to better themselves.

fast food nation and super size me

Fast Food Nation was a bestselling nonfiction by Eric Schlosser's which talks about the behind the scene of food industry. Fast Food nation also tracks down the major history of big food industry which i think has taken over our every day food and transformed them into a major business money maker. The people that own these industry don't care about the people that are eating their food because to them its all about the money the more you buy the better it is for them. The same can be said about the film Super Size Me which was directed by Morgan Spurlock. Spurlock goes through a 31 day diet to see if fast food really is bad for people. At the end of the film Spurlock got really sick and had to be hospitalized. I believe that fast food industry should be more cautions about what they feed people but at the same time we need to watch out for what we eat, its easy to always point the finger at that obvious problem but we need to be real with ourself and understand that if we continue to eat these fast food we will be a victim to sickness

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Peer Review Worksheet

1. Introduction: How does the first paragraph introduce both the paper’s topic and the writer’s approach or general conclusion? Is the first sentence attention-getting and relevant to the topic?

           in the first paragraph both the papers topic and writes had a clear general conclusion. also in the first sentence it had a very well attention-getting it was well written with close to none mistakes.

2. What can you identify as a thesis statement? (Re-write it below) Suggest, if possible, a way to improve the introduction or thesis statement.

you had a clear thesis statement you dont have to work on it much. if anything all you have to do is add a bit more to the thesis and you'll have a perfect thesis statement. i would add how your meal came to be in the first place.

3. Structure: Can you identify the organization of the paper from the main idea of each paragraph? What are the main concepts explored in the paper? Does each paragraph make a relevant point that is distinct from what has already been covered? What are the main conclusions?

i could identify the organization of the paper from the main idea of each paragraph. each paragraph does make a relavant point that is distinct from what has already been covered. the main conclusion is that you wrote a pretty good essay which is easy to read and understand.

4. Clarity/Style: Did you find distracting grammar, punctuation, spelling, or word usage problems? Identify any patterns or themes you detect. Is the tone of the essay formal? If you find awkward sentences, try to explain why they don’t make sense to you.

i didn't find any distracting grammar, punctuation and spelling. the tone of the essay is formal all your sentences were very clear you didn't have any awkward sentences.

5. Resources: Does the author clearly identify his/her sources? Is proper in-text and reference format used?

the author clearly identified his sources and he used proper in-text and reference format.

6. What is/are the paper’s greatest strength(s)? Explain.

this papers greatest strengths are clear idea, great grammar, clear thesis and a very easy to read essay.